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SATURDAY, FEBRUARY 7, 2009 (10:35 AM)

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(I'm feeling exanimate)

I drove by your house 20 times last night
Your light was on
Were you in there ignoring me?
Im sure you saw my car go by
Why didnt you ask me in?
I wont drive by so much today
Maybe only 10 times
I think Im over you

Category: Religion & Philosophy

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Posted Feb 18, 09 by annestevenson4
im 58, and i am still driving by his house as often as i can.... As soon as Nancy comes home ,,,, we both take a little drive arounf the neighborhood.... we stop after the l0th time..... wonderful poem speaks volumes to one hell of alaot of people... thanks for posting..

Posted Feb 10, 09 by wheresthesea (

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whaaat? only teenagers do that don't they? I thought adults only drive by once and chuck a brick through the window (have i been reading the wrong newspaper?) xox

Posted Feb 9, 09 by LittleStar (

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You are a Gift...that keeps on giving....
and the itch won't go away...... :D

Posted Feb 9, 09 by NatureJunkie (

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This is one of my very favorite poems ever. I wish it were in a bound volume of something. I would put in on my shelf next to Whitman, Dickinson, Bishop, Kinnell, and Collins. And just to please SillyLeslie, I'd put a volume of e.e. cummings there, too.

Posted Feb 9, 09 by HaHaHa (

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This is very good. I hope you continue deep thoughts and writing.

Posted Feb 9, 09 by SillyLeslie (

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Lovely x0x

(I wanted to make a comment like "come on in" or something silly, but this piece is too good for that....)

Posted Feb 7, 09 by NatureJunkie (

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You stole these words right out of the Me I used to be some 30-odd years ago. But I'm giving you full credit for this beautiful, melancholy poem.