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The Cave

MONDAY, MAY 4, 2009 (2:21 PM)

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The Cave

The Cave; You tip toe in, in silence; Its dark and quiet; You stop and think; You hesitate; Your eyes are glancing like lazors; Your ears are catching every bit of motion; Curious but protective; The silence is scary; You here the air; You here your thoughts; And THAT petrifies you; The surrounding is mysterious; You wonder; You question; But nothing; Nothing but the unknown; makes you uneasy; makes you insecure; makes you scared; But it could also; Make you excited; Make you hope; Make you Beleive; The Cave is a dense place; But maybe , just maybe; There could be some glimpse of light; It all depends on your perception; -Rachel Brochu-

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Posted May 5, 09 by rachel363
peeves--Thxs peeves... im real happy u like hun...ya.. exactly!!.. i just love writting down my thoughts and feelings that way.. its been a while i didnt do it i should get back in it

Wes-- Thxs Wes:).. i Love writting down my thoughts and feelings through poetry--been a little while i didnt do it.. dont know if im good or anything but all that matters to me is expressing myself through this and sharing it with others

Posted May 4, 09 by Its.Wes (

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Rachel, this is really good.